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Wedding Bells

On June 2, 2021June 2, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Story, ThrushbeardLeave a comment

The rest of the preparations were completed without drama, although the wound to Anaria’s heart still ached.  Finally, she was pronounced ready, and her helpers led her from the room. She was escorted downstairs by the group of laughing, chattering women and felt warmed by their happiness on her behalf. Well, if her mother couldn’t …

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In Medias Res

On May 30, 2021May 30, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Random Fiction, StoryLeave a comment

This is the exercise from the final week of the Virtual Writing Academy. Stumbled across the whole playlist one day and had an absolute ball doing the sessions. Delaney jerked, jolted from the delicate task of breaking out of the museum archive. The cops were here. She heard the sirens, flinched from the flashing red …

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Ready to Work

On May 26, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Nightingale, StoryLeave a comment

The very first section was drawn from an exercise to write without punctuation. It'll need some added in the edit, but I like the breathlessness it gives the paragraph. Memories People were running everywhere scattering and screaming and crying and bleeding as he watched in helpless terror while his arm continued to move the leaden …

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Unlocked Door – Part 2

On May 23, 2021May 23, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Random Fiction, StoryLeave a comment

They began walking slowly down the path running beside the wall. Isobel paused and turned to the maid. “Oh, please take my sewing back to my sitting room, I don’t think I’ll be doing any more this morning, and my guardians will be here soon enough to chaperone us.” Duncan added, “And if anyone takes …

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Mothers

On May 16, 2021May 16, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Story, ThrushbeardLeave a comment

As Sarah moved across the room to help with arranging Anaria’s hair, someone knocked at the door. Gwen went to answer it, standing to one side as her little brother slipped through the door, wide-eyed. “Mum, you look like a princess.” He flushed at the smiles and chuckles this brought and Sarah gave him a …

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Point of View

On May 12, 2021May 12, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Story, Writing ExercisesLeave a comment

An exercise from Steering the Craft by Ursula Le Guinn that looks at the same scene from a bunch of different points of view... Rose bent for one final check in the dressing table mirror, adjusted an earring that had somehow twisted, then joined her godmother, Mariana, at the door.  Mariana gave her a fond …

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Uncaged

On May 9, 2021May 9, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Nightingale, StoryLeave a comment

It was another three days before Captain Saros's ship, and its passengers, left port. Leila spent the days helping in the kitchen and getting to know the curious locals brought in by Timon and Marya's excursions. Her lap loom was past repair she'd heard, but a master carpenter was willing to try creating a new …

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Herald Challenge

On May 5, 2021May 5, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn StoryLeave a comment

A very silly story based on a randomly drawn Storyteller card and three picture dice. The image on the card determines the character and some of the setting. The images on the dice are supposed to be incorporated into the story at some point but I got a bit carried away after the crab and …

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Being Gorgeous

On April 28, 2021April 28, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Story, Writing ExercisesLeave a comment

Another exercise from Ursula Le Guinn's Steering the Craft book. This time, to write something gorgeous. To play with the language and not worry about getting too ornate. Calypso arrived at Bondi as the early morning exercise crowds left for work, while the backpackers were still in their bunks after another night of beers and …

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Songbird

On April 25, 2021April 25, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Nightingale, StoryLeave a comment

Leila waved Marya off on her errands from behind a small mountain of assorted vegetables. She settled into a rhythm of chopping and scooping, from pile, to board, to pot; soothed by the easy repetition and the quiet, comfortable noises of the kitchen, punctuated by bursts of conversation from the public eating room as the …

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