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a pottery bowl of multi-grain gruel on a large wooden desk strewn with hand-written letters and reports Ideogram image

Familiar Taste

On October 12, 2025September 6, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn Lyra, Story, Writing ExercisesLeave a comment

For those who've read Sackcloth and Sky, a scene from Zain's point of view... The boy put the bowl on Zain's desk, yet another time-wasting exercise from the kitchen. He had more important business than eating unappetising little snacks. He breathed in, a memory rose. One of the gruel Lyra would bring him during those …

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A flower bed full of lush rose bushes, there are only a few blooms left. Behind the roses is a raised wooden pergola, it's round and white-painted with narrow pillars holding up a domed roof Ideogram image

Eavesdrop

On October 5, 2025September 6, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn 10 Minute Sprints, StoryLeave a comment

Myrah hadn’t meant to eavesdrop on her brother’s marriage proposal, she’d been snipping flowers for the vase in Mother’s sitting room and found some lovely late-blooming roses behind the bower. She was bent over, coaxing a particularly reclusive flower from behind its thorny guards when voices had hit her from the raised floor of the …

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A basket of bolene mushrooms on a knee-high weathered stone wall in a country garden Ideogram image

Woods Cottage – Day 17

On September 28, 2025September 6, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn One Day at a Thyme, StoryLeave a comment

I had things to do today, nothing earth shattering, just the weekly security report from Sir Scatterscurry, and jam-making. Of course I didn’t need a mouse with a sword and an over-developed sense of chivalry guarding my home, but his primary domain was the potting shed, and he did a lovely job of keeping my …

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An image of two identical girls, like mirror reflections. one girl is a muddy, happy field hockey player, with a hockey game in her background. the other, with the same colouring and features but a serious expression is in tennis gear with a fancy club tennis court behind her.

Sticky

On September 21, 2025September 6, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn 10 Minute Sprints, StoryLeave a comment

“Dad, Dad, Dad! What’s brown and sticky?” Damian wasn’t sure he wanted to know the answer. “I don’t know, what?” “A stick!” Emily flopped into the armchair, giggling at her own joke. That actually a pretty good one, definitely better than yesterday’s. He chuckled. “Nice, I’ll have to remember that, tell the guys at work.” …

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a young woman with long dark hair in a wooden tub in an old fashioned bath house. She looks tired, and another young woman with honey blonde hair, wearing a dull green dress, is next to the tub, helping her wash her hair. Ideogram image

Warm and Clean

On September 14, 2025September 6, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn Story, ThrushbeardLeave a comment

The dim, golden warmth of the bath house was almost painful after their trek. Sarah shooed them towards the mid-heat tubs. “Strip and in.” Evan was tending the fire. He made a point of turning his back to them and focusing on feeding wood to the flames. Eleanor was grateful for the courtesy but still …

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A charming English manor-house near the top of a hill with a narrow road leading up to it. Modern day, afternoon Ideogram image

Steep

On September 7, 2025August 2, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn 10 Minute Sprints, StoryLeave a comment

It was all well and good to have a home up the hill. The views were lovely and there was none of the worry about flooding the valley people had, but did the damn hill have to be so steep? Justine re-gripped the shopping bags and kept going. “Alright then?” Ergh, not young Marcus McShea. …

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A large comfortable English family sitting room at Christmas with comfortable sofas and chairs and stockings for all the grandchildren strung across the mantelpiece in a great long row of oversized, home-knitted socks Ideogram image

Sentences – Short and Long

On August 31, 2025August 2, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn Story, Writing ExercisesLeave a comment

An exercise from Ursula Le Guin’s Steering the Craft book – write one piece with sentences of seven or fewer words, then one that's all one sentence... Exercise 3a – Short Octavia hung back, scared. She didn’t want to go in there. It was dangerous, everyone said so. Why did Roz have to dare them? …

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A glass-fronted antique display cabinet holding a collection of fancy collectible dolls in various styles of historical dress. The cabinet is in a bedroom with otherwise modern decor. Ideogram image

Display

On August 24, 2025August 2, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn 10 Minute Sprints, StoryLeave a comment

It had taken a week of solid work – every evening after dinner – but it was finally done. It was beautiful. A proper display cupboard for the Collectors’ Edition dolls she’d been buying for years. She’d already had the cupboard, a lovely glass-fronted antique. It had just needed some decoration, to put each of …

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Historical fantasy image of the interior of a large, warm, rustic wooden bath house at night. There are large wooden tubs set up along the side of the room, and a large fire heating a copper reservoir of water at the far end Ideogram image

Clean and Dry

On August 17, 2025August 2, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn Story, ThrushbeardLeave a comment

The dim, golden warmth of the bath house was almost painful after their trek. Sarah shooed them towards the mid-heat tubs. “Strip and in.” Evan was tending the fire. He made a point of turning his back to them and focusing on feeding wood to the flames. Eleanor was grateful for the courtesy but still …

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An idyllic tropical beach with palm trees, seen through the windows of a luxurious hotel room Ideogram image

Palm

On August 10, 2025August 2, 2025 By Kat RedfernIn 10 Minute Sprints, StoryLeave a comment

The leaves on the palm trees outside his hotel window waved mockingly on the afternoon breeze. ‘Here you are in paradise’ they seemed to say, ‘but all you can do is pace about your too-large-for-one hotel room, talk on your phone, and tap on your computer.’ And the room was too large for one person, …

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