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Village Tour

On June 10, 2020June 10, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Greenwitch, StoryLeave a comment

Edda showed Millie up three flights of stairs to her room, leaving her to unpack a little and explore. It was a lovely, light-filled place with comfortable furniture and a neat little balcony begging for young plants to be nursed into growth there, in company with the two blooming vines hugging themselves to the building …

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Picture Perfect

On June 7, 2020June 7, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Changing Lanes, StoryLeave a comment

Paul kept Lexi hopping with requests for information on the house, its layout, its history, its owner and more. Eventually she put her foot down and organised a conference between him, Simon and the three architects in order to lay out both the history and the possible futures of the house. She decided not to …

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Weriban Bound

On June 3, 2020June 3, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Lost Island, StoryLeave a comment

The party leaving Sophia's family home a couple of days later was larger than expected, at least by Connor. Sophia's parents came to a swift decision after a letter arrived from Prince Stephen, requesting their kind attendance at a conference to discuss the education of the future queen of Lillia. Sophia thought he needed to …

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The Bath House

On May 31, 2020April 1, 2021 By Kat RedfernIn Story, ThrushbeardLeave a comment

After another twenty minutes or so of conversation, during which Anaria was conscious of being kindly but thoroughly questioned and assessed, Ingrid and Samuel made their farewells and the household settled in for the night. The next morning, following Sarah's instructions, Anaria gathered fresh clothes, donned the previous day's outfit and joined her in the …

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Susan Cooper’s Tolkien Lecture

On May 29, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn AnalysisLeave a comment

 A couple of weeks ago, my writing group gave ourselves a collective week off and, instead of putting our latest 2,000-odd words up for feedback, we tuned in to the 2020 Tolkien Lecture from Pembroke College at Oxford. It was a great presentation, a flowing, ninety minute conversation between six highly regarded authors and an …

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Admissions

On May 27, 2020May 27, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Secrets, StoryLeave a comment

He knew his smile was not going to be well received but couldn't help its spread. She'd been wanting to kiss him. He was right. At the sight of the smile, her eyes opened wide, realising what she'd said, what she'd admitted. "No. Don't you dare be smug. You are not allowed to be smug." …

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Tea and Talk

On May 24, 2020May 24, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Greenwitch, StoryLeave a comment

The woman laughed, "Oh I do like an eager apprentice. Not that I've ever had one before mind you, greenwitches are a little few and far between." "How did you become one then?" "Thankfully there was a greenwitch available to me as I am to you." Millie started and blushed, "I haven't even introduced myself." …

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I've learned so much from my mistakes, I'm thinking of making a few more

Five Mistakes

On May 22, 2020May 22, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Analysis1 Comment

I've been watching another YouTube video on writing, specifically on the five main mistakes made by 'amateur' writers, also known as aspiring writers. I'm not sure which is less depressing. The first one listed was Point of View, or rather the constantly changing nature of point of view in some early stage stories. I've slipped …

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Passing Muster

On May 20, 2020May 20, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Story, ThrushbeardLeave a comment

Anaria smiled gratefully at the burly forester, it was nice to not be seen as the one at fault for a change. Still, old habits run deep and she stepped in to defend her father, "Sebastian is a toad, but I'm afraid it was my behaviour that goaded father. I was very rude to a …

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Staking Claims

On May 17, 2020May 17, 2020 By Kat RedfernIn Story, Tunnels & DragonsLeave a comment

Sariya smiled encouragingly at them and poked Marcus. "What?" "It would be nice to introduce us." He grumbled but obeyed, presenting Sariya as  his 'honoured guest from the far lands'. Sariya knew enough about the world's geography to be amused at her origins being placed in the area of their maps generally tagged with 'here …

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